Disappointed! It started promising and it could have been such a heartbreaking and emotional read. There were few moments, mainly in the first chapters where I felt crying for Amber and her brother Jake but the writing changed and it continued to be inconsistent for the rest of book. Some of the "turns of the events " were predictable and sometimes the dialogue was so cliché it made me cringe. It made me wonder was it sheer laziness or lack of a good editing? There were few holes in the plot, lots of grammatical errors and did anyone else notice the font changes, it was ever so distracting. This could have been a really good book and I am sorry that it didn't live to my expectations.
Ellelou's Book Corner
Disappointed! It started promising and it could have been such a heartbreaking and emotional read. There were few moments, mainly in the first chapters where I felt crying for Amber and her brother Jake but the writing changed and it continued to be inconsistent for the rest of book. Some of the "turns of the events " were predictable and sometimes the dialogue was so cliché it made me cringe. It made me wonder was it sheer laziness or lack of a good editing? There were few holes in the plot, lots of grammatical errors and did anyone else notice the font changes, it was ever so distracting. This could have been a really good book and I am sorry that it didn't live to my expectations.
